The Street Screenplay/Script Re-Draft

This is our screenplay developed primarily by myself but with the contribution of other group member we coherently agreed that is was appropriate for our soap opera trailer.

FADE IN:

INT.   BENJAMIN’S HOME.   DAY

BENJAMIN is clutching his face with his palm looking towards the floor.

BENJAMIN

(CALM TONE)

“I can’t do this anymore...I’m just going to leave you”

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EXT.   SIDE ROAD.   DAY

A car slowly drives towards the street.

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INT.   BENJAMIN’S HOME.   DAY

HAYLEY points and yells at BENJAMIN.

HAYLEY

(YELLING)

“What? Because of me”

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EXT.   THE STREET.   DAY

DWAYNE and CAMERON stare at the car driving past, intrigued to see who is in the passenger seat as both of them are squinting.

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INT.   BENJAMIN’S HOME.   DAY

BENJAMIN snaps into a violent rage and points vigorously at HAYLEY as his bloodshot eyes open extremely wide.

BENJAMIN

(YELLING)

“Stupid! That’s what you are...Stupid!”

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EXT.   THE STREET.   DAY

The car slowly approaches BENJAMIN’S home

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INT.   BENJAMIN’S HOME.   DAY

BENJAMIN tosses the newspaper to the ground and walks towards the door. HAYLEY grabs his arm, BENJAMIN turns around pushing HAYLEY whilst pointing in her face.

BENJAMIN

(YELLING)

“Leave me alone”

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EXT.   THE STREET.   DAY

The car pulls up outside BENJAMIN’S home and MICHELLE slowly exits the car and approaches the front door. SALLY and her mother are in look on in shock whilst the baby plays innocently. Michelle knocks on the door.

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INT.   BENJAMIN’S HOME.   DAY

BENJAMIN and HAYLEY walk in the passage way towards the front door seeing a silhouette through the frosted glass. BENJAMIN opens the door, MICHELLE looks up with a smug look on her face.

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